Last week, 27 of you submitted essays to me through my blog (http://www.ieltsielts.com). In this video, we look at a few of the essays and gauge their effectiveness.
This video is best viewed from my blog, where you can find copies of all 27 essays. Please visit http://ieltsielts.com/videoblog-contest-results-27-of-your-essays-have-been-assessed/
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