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Link to my previous videos:
IELTS writing task 1 – describing a process: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eTtB9_rxAGU
IELTS writing secrets (Part 1): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z_oN9YmYK08
IELTS writing secrets (Part 2): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WT0xt72Jj64
IELTS writing secrets (Part 3): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-fJwnvqNLrE
